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Poems with that "je ne sai quoi!"
Posted: Sun Nov 30, 2008 6:57 pm
by Northern Lass
Rite let's go for the biggest poem!
a rhyming couplet (2 lines)
and heres a good idea Robbie!! it has to make sense!
So I will start ....ok? good ! ha ha
As I walked down the deserted street
I missed the sound of downtrodden feetwell wot do you expect after a glass of vino! hic!
so come on lets follow it on.....
ps it doesnt have to rhyme with feet just as long as the 2 lines you choose rhyme at the end
Re: FUN TIME IN THE SNUG - Watch this space
Posted: Sun Nov 30, 2008 7:03 pm
by mallosa
This could be good
Oh, how I longed for a visable host
of a human being, or even a ghost!
Re: FUN TIME IN THE SNUG - Watch this space
Posted: Sun Nov 30, 2008 7:12 pm
by Northern Lass
but my inner voice guided me
saying be strong and you will see!
Re: FUN TIME IN THE SNUG - Watch this space
Posted: Sun Nov 30, 2008 7:25 pm
by mallosa
...for you know in your heart
where you're destined to be
COME ON ROB! Join in....
Re: FUN TIME IN THE SNUG - Watch this space
Posted: Sun Nov 30, 2008 7:27 pm
by Rob
You can't even lurk in peace anymore!!
The hardest heart is doomed to melt
Love is a passion that will be felt 
Re: FUN TIME IN THE SNUG - Watch this space
Posted: Sun Nov 30, 2008 7:33 pm
by Northern Lass
So on I trudged my senses raw
until I stumbled upon a door!
Re: FUN TIME IN THE SNUG - Watch this space
Posted: Sun Nov 30, 2008 7:37 pm
by Rob
So dream oh sleeper
Rise high and fly
Re: FUN TIME IN THE SNUG - Watch this space
Posted: Sun Nov 30, 2008 7:46 pm
by Northern Lass
Who said that behind that door
reveal yourself or talk no more!
Re: FUN TIME IN THE SNUG - Watch this space
Posted: Sun Nov 30, 2008 7:57 pm
by mallosa
'twasn't me, I can honestly say
it must have been someone who lives far away!
Re: FUN TIME IN THE SNUG - Watch this space
Posted: Sun Nov 30, 2008 8:08 pm
by Northern Lass
Not that little dutch gnome with a funny accent
who walks with a stoop and whose legs are bent!
Re: FUN TIME IN THE SNUG - Watch this space
Posted: Mon Dec 01, 2008 12:21 am
by Northern Lass
There's something quite strange about him altogether
and hey! have you seen how he looks wearing leather! 
Re: FUN TIME IN THE SNUG - Watch this space
Posted: Mon Dec 01, 2008 9:55 pm
by mallosa
That may have been what made the girls swoon
whenever he wore it to the 'Tower Ballroom'
Re: FUN TIME IN THE SNUG - Watch this space
Posted: Mon Dec 01, 2008 9:58 pm
by Northern Lass
Sadly though youths bloom is short
you watch him give a cutting retort!
Re: FUN TIME IN THE SNUG - Watch this space
Posted: Mon Dec 01, 2008 11:44 pm
by mallosa
A cutting retort, I hear you say?
..forgive me for thinking that you'll make him pay
Re: FUN TIME IN THE SNUG - Watch this space
Posted: Mon Dec 01, 2008 11:48 pm
by Northern Lass
I want to know why some midlands hunk
would leave his chums and do a bunk!