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A poem
Posted: Wed Jan 06, 2010 7:58 pm
by Rob
Just a little poem i composed.
Winter
Brrr it's cold
I Hate Cold
The End
Re: A poem
Posted: Thu Jan 07, 2010 12:31 am
by dianel

How Zen!
Re: A poem
Posted: Thu Jan 07, 2010 4:19 am
by MarkCDodd
Started of a bit slow. The middle got me interested and I was hooked by the end.
I usually don't read such long pieces of prose so well done!
Re: A poem
Posted: Thu Jan 07, 2010 8:44 am
by Teifi
I'll read it fully when I have time!
Re: A poem
Posted: Thu Jan 07, 2010 4:37 pm
by Northern Lass
Rob wrote:Just a little poem i composed.
Winter
Brrr it's cold
I Hate Cold
The End
I have read this over and over and each time I come away with something different
how thought provoking
how perceptive
how erudite
how do you get away with the useless dribble you put on here!

Re: A poem
Posted: Thu Jan 07, 2010 7:42 pm
by mallosa

Only Rob could get away with that

Re: A poem
Posted: Thu Jan 07, 2010 8:14 pm
by Northern Lass
MarkCDodd wrote:Started of a bit slow. The middle got me interested and I was hooked by the end.
I usually don't read such long pieces of prose so well done!
these two are as bad as each other!

Re: A poem
Posted: Thu Jan 07, 2010 9:54 pm
by MarkCDodd
You inspired me to write one about our weather.
Title: A Poem About How I Feel RIght Now by Mark C. Dodd. Copywright 2010.
Geeze it is hot!
Re: A poem
Posted: Thu Jan 07, 2010 10:54 pm
by Northern Lass
They are two of the same, Peas in a pod
you know their names, Williams and Dodd
a double act if ever there were
posting on here without a care!
Like fluff in a navel they stick to each other
but they better be careful or will soon discover
that naughty boys get their come uppence
and for all your daftness we care not tuppence!
But I have to say despite all your saft jokes
you aint half a pair of bostin blokes!

Re: A poem
Posted: Thu Jan 07, 2010 10:59 pm
by mallosa

Beat that then you two!
Re: A poem
Posted: Thu Jan 07, 2010 11:17 pm
by Rob
I don't compete.Especially if its with girls!!!.
Glad you put my name first though Northern Lassie! Though to be honest i thought we were supposed to respect privacy!! Now every one knows my surname is Williams!!

Re: A poem
Posted: Fri Jan 08, 2010 9:07 am
by Northern Lass
Rob wrote:I don't compete.Especially if its with girls!!!.
Glad you put my name first though Northern Lassie! Though to be honest i thought we were supposed to respect privacy!! Now every one knows my surname is Williams!!

No!! is it!
fancy that!
I never knew!!!!
You have never said!

Only on zillions of posts everywhere on tinternet!
and on BCC

Re: A poem
Posted: Fri Jan 08, 2010 5:35 pm
by grangers14

Oh I thought you had written some poetry there for a start
I like reading heart warming poetry.
Jo

Re: A poem
Posted: Fri Jan 08, 2010 6:01 pm
by Northern Lass
grangers14 wrote::? Oh I thought you had written some poetry there for a start
I like reading heart warming poetry.
Jo

good idea!
rite new thread coming up
