Looks OK except that here
https://www.tribalpages.com/tribe/brows ... ver=521481 it says William died before 1841
But he is in the 1841 census aged 25
I think this is his death
FANTON, WILLIAM 33
GRO Reference: 1845 M Quarter in WEST BROMWICH Volume 18 Page 481
but I can't find a marriage for him to Hannah/Ann Freeth, nor one for her to George Moseley.
However, there is this one:
St Peters, Harborne
15 Dec 1840
Joseph Fantom full age bach sawyer Harborne, father Isaac Fantom sawyer
Phoebe Freeth full age spinst Harborne, father Samuel Freeth brass founder
I think that is William's brother Joseph, marrying Hannah's sister Phoebe
Name: Phebe Freeth
Gender: Female
Baptism Date: 31 Jul 1814
Baptism Place: Smethwick,Stafford,England
Father:
Samuel Freeth
Mother:
Fanny
FHL Film Number: 435846
1841
Piece: 908
Book: 9
Folio: 39
Page Number: 27
New Village, Oldbury
Josh Fantom 20 sawyer
Phebe Fantom 25
1851
Household Schedule Number: 32
Piece: 2024
Folio: 376
Page Number: 9
Freeth St, Oldbury
Joseph Fantom 35 sawyer Oldbury
Phoebe Fantom 37 Smethwick
George Fantom 9 Oldbury
Samuel Fantom 2 Oldbury
Next but one to Joseph in 1851 are Thomas and Maria plus kids. Another brother I suppose
Household Schedule Number: 30
Piece: 2024
Folio: 376
Page Number: 9
Freeth St
Thomas Fanton 36 sawyer Oldbury
Maria Fanton 36 Oldbury
Thomas Fantom 12 Oldbury
Emma Fantom 10 Oldbury
Ellen Fantom 10 Oldbury
William Fantom 3 Oldbury
Edward Hivaley 24 visitor Shrewsbury
Leonard Timmins 11 visitor Oldbury
Not sure that you should add much more unless someone wants to really sort this lot properly